The Noblemans Magic Bastard
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The Noblemans Magic Bastard

The iron gate clangs shut behind the carriage, the sound echoing the finality of Tabitha's still form receding in the distance. You press your face against the velvet upholstery, the rich fabric doing little to soothe the rawness in your throat.

JadedKarma841
AuthorJadedKarma841
Created16. February 2026
Chapters8

Story context

World description

Old England, somewhere between 1600-1890, magick exists. Sorcerers and priestesses who either study magick or pray to the gods for magick. Jaime has a rare penchant for needing neither study nor prayer to work magick.

Initial situation

A young Jaime is tending to his small homestead with Tabitha, his late mother's female lover who has been raising him for the past 3 years in his mother's stead, when an opulent carriage arrives, claiming that Jaime is to come live with Lord Du Lac, a man he has never met or had knowledge of. Jaime is his illegitimate son. Lord Du Lac has recently lost his true heir, and wishes to keep Jaime close as a... contingency plan of ...

Objective

Jaime has to navigate his new circumstances as a secret bastard of a cruel nobleman, thrust into becoming a squire as a cover, and his burgeoning wilde magick. Can he find allies in this cruel new world? Friends? Love?

Chapter samples

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Chapter 1
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The iron gate clangs shut behind the carriage, the sound echoing the finality of Tabitha's still form receding in the distance. You press your face against the velvet upholstery, the rich fabric doing little to soothe the rawness in your throat. Tears blur the already fading image of your home – the small cottage, the overgrown garden, th...

The iron gate clangs shut behind the carriage, the sound echoing the finality of Tabitha's still form receding in the distance. You press your face against the velvet upholstery, the rich fabric doing little to soothe the rawness in your throat. Tears blur the already fading image of your home – the small cottage, the overgrown garden, the familiar swing hanging from the old oak. All of it swallowed by the relentless green of the English countryside. Beside you, the man who introduced himself as Mr. Davies – Lord Du Lac’s steward – sits stiffly, his gaze fixed out the window. He emanates an air of cold efficiency, like a finely crafted clockwork toy wound too tight. He hadn't flinched when the knight's blade pierced Tabitha's chest, and his eyes remain devoid of emotion now. The casual brutality replays in your mind, fueling a volatile cocktail of grief and terror. The opulent carriage is a stark contrast to your former life. Gilded trim, plush seats, and the Du Lac crest emblazoned on every surface – a constant, suffocating reminder of your new reality. You are no longer Jaime, the village boy, but a pawn in Lord Du Lac’s game. A spare, a contingency. Hours bleed together as the carriage rumbles along the rutted roads. You try to recall Tabitha's face, the warmth of her hand in yours, the stories she told of your mother – a woman you barely remember but whose magick apparently coursed through your veins. The magick you’ve always feared, the magick that now feels like a dangerous secret you must guard with your life. As dusk settles, the carriage finally slows, and you glimpse the imposing silhouette of Du Lac Manor against the darkening sky. Stone walls rise like cliffs, punctuated by narrow windows that seem to stare down at you with cold judgment. The air hangs heavy with the scent of damp earth and something else… something metallic, like old blood. Mr. Davies clears his throat, his voice sharp and devoid of warmth. "We have arrived, boy. Remember your place."

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Chapter 2
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The carriage door swings open, revealing not a grand entrance, but a narrow, cobbled path leading around the back of the manor. Mr. Davies gestures curtly, and you follow him, your worn boots scuffing against the uneven stones. Torches flicker in iron sconces, casting long, dancing shadows that twist familiar shapes into grotesque figures...

The carriage door swings open, revealing not a grand entrance, but a narrow, cobbled path leading around the back of the manor. Mr. Davies gestures curtly, and you follow him, your worn boots scuffing against the uneven stones. Torches flicker in iron sconces, casting long, dancing shadows that twist familiar shapes into grotesque figures. You're led through a maze of corridors, each more dimly lit and oppressive than the last. The air grows colder, heavier with the scent of dust and disuse. You pass silent servants who offer only fleeting glances, their faces etched with a mixture of pity and fear. It's clear this isn't the route for honored guests. Finally, after what feels like an endless descent, Mr. Davies stops before a heavy oak door. He raps sharply, then pushes it open, revealing a lavishly decorated office. The room is dominated by a massive mahogany desk, behind which sits a man who can only be Lord Du Lac. He's older than you imagined, his face a web of fine lines, his eyes like chips of flint. But it's the aura of power that truly radiates from him – a palpable force that presses down on you, stealing your breath. "Jacoby Hammich," he says, his voice a low, resonant rumble. "Come closer. Let me see what I've salvaged." You step forward hesitantly, acutely aware of his gaze dissecting you. He studies you with a cold detachment, as if you were a specimen pinned beneath glass. "My late, sickly son... was a disappointment," he says, his words devoid of emotion. "After he died, I sought out other options, my indiscretions that had spread across the land. Alas, finding you was... fortunate. Even more so that I could rescue you from such a disgraceful circumstance." He pauses, his eyes narrowing. "I intend to breed for legitimate heirs, of course. But on the off chance my seed has soured, you will be my contingency. My insurance." He leans forward, his voice dropping to a near whisper. "No one must know of your lineage. You will be treated as no more than a common squire. You will earn your place, boy." He gestures towards a corner of the room, where a pile of worn clothing lies discarded. "Strip off those rags and put on what has been provided. I shant speak to you after today unless you are chosen to be my heir. Do not disappoint me."

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Chapter 3
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The coarse fabric scratches against your skin as you pull on the ill-fitting clothes. A squire's uniform – breeches too tight, tunic too loose. You feel a strange detachment as you dress, as if you're playing a part in a play you never rehearsed for. Lord Du Lac's words echo in your mind: insurance. Mr. Davies reappears, his face as impa...

The coarse fabric scratches against your skin as you pull on the ill-fitting clothes. A squire's uniform – breeches too tight, tunic too loose. You feel a strange detachment as you dress, as if you're playing a part in a play you never rehearsed for. Lord Du Lac's words echo in your mind: insurance. Mr. Davies reappears, his face as impassive as ever. "Follow me," he says, his voice clipped and devoid of warmth. He leads you back through the maze of corridors, but this time the route takes you towards the rear of the manor. The air grows thick with the scent of horses and hay. You emerge into a courtyard bustling with activity. Grooms tend to horses, stable hands muck out stalls, and squires practice swordplay with wooden dummies. It's a world away from the opulent interiors of the manor, a world of sweat and toil. Mr. Davies leads you to a long, low building nestled beside the stables. "This is where the squires reside," he says, gesturing towards the entrance. "Your quarters are at the far end. I trust you can find your way." With that, he turns and disappears back into the manor, leaving you standing alone in the bustling courtyard. You step inside the squires' building, and a wave of noise and smells hits you. The air is thick with the odors of unwashed bodies, stale ale, and damp straw. Squires lounge on rickety cots, clean their weapons, or gamble at dice. They eye you with open curiosity, their faces a mixture of suspicion and amusement. One of the squires, a burly youth with a scarred face, approaches you. "Well, well, what have we here?" he says, his voice laced with sarcasm. "Looks like we've got a new recruit. Fresh from the village, are we? What's your name, boy?" You hesitate, your mind racing. You're supposed to be a nobody, a commoner. But you're also Lord Du Lac's son, his insurance. The weight of that secret presses down on you, a heavy burden you must carry alone. "Jaime," you say, your voice barely a whisper. "Jaime Hammich." "Hammich," the burly youth repeats, his eyes narrowing. "Never heard of you. Well, Jaime Hammich, welcome to the bottom of the pecking order. You'll be cleaning stables and fetching water for the rest of us until you prove yourself. Understand?"

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